The Demon Within
The Last War #1
Josh Gagnier
Genre: Urban Fantasy
Date of Publication: February 2015
ISBN: 9781520103358
ASIN: B00T69ZCRC
Number of pages: 213
Paradise or The Abyss, you decide
Joe grew up listening to the voice in his head. It helped him through school, helped him gain wealth in his career.
The final temptation of power was too much. He hadn't considered the cost.
Now he must find a way to defeat The Demon Within.
Little does he know, his every move is being recorded. Every misstep is being judged. As he gets ever closer to winning over his demon, heavenly eyes watch from above. Some root for his success while others hope he'll fail.
While Joe fights his demon on the battlefront, the angel Michael fights for his Soul.
Will Joe win out?
Will Michael be able to save Joe's soul?
Or will the Demon win and thrust Joe into the Abyss.
Excerpt:
“You must be new
to these parts. Name’s Belath,” says a
figure standing over a young man lying against a large trash compactor. A look toward the sound of the voice reveals
what appears to be an older man who, by the looks of him, has had, to put it
lightly, a less than spoiled life. His
dark skin is loose with an almost leathery roughness, like a stretched hide
left in the sun too long. Several of his
teeth have long escaped the captivity of his smile and those left plot against
the warden. The lines of time can be
seen through his mostly grey with spattered black scruff. His posture is the only thing that doesn’t
match his rundown appearance. He stands
straight and proud holding his shoulders square, almost in a protest, refusing
to look weak. He bears the righteous
indignation of an innocent man facing the gallows.
to these parts. Name’s Belath,” says a
figure standing over a young man lying against a large trash compactor. A look toward the sound of the voice reveals
what appears to be an older man who, by the looks of him, has had, to put it
lightly, a less than spoiled life. His
dark skin is loose with an almost leathery roughness, like a stretched hide
left in the sun too long. Several of his
teeth have long escaped the captivity of his smile and those left plot against
the warden. The lines of time can be
seen through his mostly grey with spattered black scruff. His posture is the only thing that doesn’t
match his rundown appearance. He stands
straight and proud holding his shoulders square, almost in a protest, refusing
to look weak. He bears the righteous
indignation of an innocent man facing the gallows.
“Just passing
through,” replies a shaky voice trying to sound formidable. A young man, thin, but seemingly fed well
enough, slowly stands and dusts himself off.
His posture seems closer to a beaten animal than a grown man. His boots are scuffed and old, but the heel
gives him a few inches in height, which is probably why he wears them. His knuckles are cracked and healing; more likely
from the heat than any type of hard labor.
The dark circles under his eyes and his unkempt appearance hint that he
hasn’t slept an entire night in years.
His jacket makes him appear even smaller, as it is a few sizes too big
and has small rips that don’t appear to be from wear and tear. He probably fished it from a dumpster. His jeans seem to be the least worn of the
man. Though dirty, they're nearly
new. This poor sap doesn’t look like he
could fight his way through a paper bag.
The only things that don’t match his overall demeanor are his eyes. Visibly swimming between pale yellow and
bright green, they draw you in and make you trust him.
through,” replies a shaky voice trying to sound formidable. A young man, thin, but seemingly fed well
enough, slowly stands and dusts himself off.
His posture seems closer to a beaten animal than a grown man. His boots are scuffed and old, but the heel
gives him a few inches in height, which is probably why he wears them. His knuckles are cracked and healing; more likely
from the heat than any type of hard labor.
The dark circles under his eyes and his unkempt appearance hint that he
hasn’t slept an entire night in years.
His jacket makes him appear even smaller, as it is a few sizes too big
and has small rips that don’t appear to be from wear and tear. He probably fished it from a dumpster. His jeans seem to be the least worn of the
man. Though dirty, they're nearly
new. This poor sap doesn’t look like he
could fight his way through a paper bag.
The only things that don’t match his overall demeanor are his eyes. Visibly swimming between pale yellow and
bright green, they draw you in and make you trust him.
“Well, ya may
want to make yourself scarce before patrols make their rounds. They let me stay because I’m the only one
within a few hundred miles with a distiller.
I can’t guarantee they won’t haul you off to camp,” Belath warns.
“What’s your name son?”
want to make yourself scarce before patrols make their rounds. They let me stay because I’m the only one
within a few hundred miles with a distiller.
I can’t guarantee they won’t haul you off to camp,” Belath warns.
“What’s your name son?”
“Don’t want to
know you. I’m not your son and I’m not
staying. Just need a little rest,”
replies the young man. He pulls his hood
over his head and turns to walk down the alley toward the main street.
know you. I’m not your son and I’m not
staying. Just need a little rest,”
replies the young man. He pulls his hood
over his head and turns to walk down the alley toward the main street.
If he were
watching where he was going instead of ignoring the world around him, he would
seen the group of four large men, obviously armed, moving quickly toward
him. He would have heard Belath’s
warning, and wouldn’t have cost himself such precious time. Belath reached him just in time to be added
as a target. The young man realized what
was happening a moment too late. A fist
hit him square in the side of the head, knocking him to one knee. Belath runs to his side and helps him to his
feet. The men must have recognized
Belath because three of them took a few steps back. Even the big one, the apparent the leader,
took a hesitant step backward. They must
have decided they had the advantage because they began to advance yet again.
watching where he was going instead of ignoring the world around him, he would
seen the group of four large men, obviously armed, moving quickly toward
him. He would have heard Belath’s
warning, and wouldn’t have cost himself such precious time. Belath reached him just in time to be added
as a target. The young man realized what
was happening a moment too late. A fist
hit him square in the side of the head, knocking him to one knee. Belath runs to his side and helps him to his
feet. The men must have recognized
Belath because three of them took a few steps back. Even the big one, the apparent the leader,
took a hesitant step backward. They must
have decided they had the advantage because they began to advance yet again.
“Gentlemen, do
not ring a bell you can’t unring,” says a stern, direct voice. It came from the young man who, only moments
earlier, seemed too weak to speak. “This
is a fight you will not win, regardless of your numbers,” the young man
continues.
not ring a bell you can’t unring,” says a stern, direct voice. It came from the young man who, only moments
earlier, seemed too weak to speak. “This
is a fight you will not win, regardless of your numbers,” the young man
continues.
In response, the
leader grabs a bat from one of his men and swings at the young man’s head. Before anyone can realize what is happening,
the young man lunges at the leader. In one
motion, he sidesteps the life ending swing, pulls a long black knife from a
sheath under his jacket, and plunges it deep into the leader’s temple with his
right hand while grabbing the bat from the ground with his left. With his next step, he swings the bat at his
second target, and finds such purchase the man’s head nearly spins
backward. Next, the young man yanks the
blade from the leader’s head and stabs the third man in the side of the neck,
almost as a cobra striking its prey. The
young man looks for the last of his adversaries, and sees him running down the
alley toward the main streets. The young
man takes a deep breath, lifts the bat, takes aim, and hurls it at his
target. The bat’s aim is precise and the
man falls to the ground, screaming in pain.
As the young man calmly walks toward his now-felled enemy, he cleans the
blood off of his knife on his pant leg, and puts it away with such dexterity it
can’t be known exactly where the sheath is hidden.
leader grabs a bat from one of his men and swings at the young man’s head. Before anyone can realize what is happening,
the young man lunges at the leader. In one
motion, he sidesteps the life ending swing, pulls a long black knife from a
sheath under his jacket, and plunges it deep into the leader’s temple with his
right hand while grabbing the bat from the ground with his left. With his next step, he swings the bat at his
second target, and finds such purchase the man’s head nearly spins
backward. Next, the young man yanks the
blade from the leader’s head and stabs the third man in the side of the neck,
almost as a cobra striking its prey. The
young man looks for the last of his adversaries, and sees him running down the
alley toward the main streets. The young
man takes a deep breath, lifts the bat, takes aim, and hurls it at his
target. The bat’s aim is precise and the
man falls to the ground, screaming in pain.
As the young man calmly walks toward his now-felled enemy, he cleans the
blood off of his knife on his pant leg, and puts it away with such dexterity it
can’t be known exactly where the sheath is hidden.
“Today you
benefit from being last, sir,” says the young man as he sits on the ground by
the last man’s head. “Enough whimpering! You merely broke your ankle on my
bat. I have no desire to take your
life,” he says as he pulls out a cigarette and lights it. “You will do
something for me. To that end, I spare
you life.” His voice is calm yet direct, “You will tell whomever you work for
it was Jekyll who reduced these men to corpses.
You will tell him this and,” he takes a long, slow drag of his
cigarette, and continues, “you will tell them this, and you will tell them,
they do not wish to meet Hyde. Do we
have a deal?” the last being more statement than question.
benefit from being last, sir,” says the young man as he sits on the ground by
the last man’s head. “Enough whimpering! You merely broke your ankle on my
bat. I have no desire to take your
life,” he says as he pulls out a cigarette and lights it. “You will do
something for me. To that end, I spare
you life.” His voice is calm yet direct, “You will tell whomever you work for
it was Jekyll who reduced these men to corpses.
You will tell him this and,” he takes a long, slow drag of his
cigarette, and continues, “you will tell them this, and you will tell them,
they do not wish to meet Hyde. Do we
have a deal?” the last being more statement than question.
The man,
believing he is being played, but not wanting to die, gives an exaggerated
nod. The young man stands and begins
walking back to where he had been resting and calls out over his shoulder.
“Belath, I guessbelieving he is being played, but not wanting to die, gives an exaggerated
nod. The young man stands and begins
walking back to where he had been resting and calls out over his shoulder.
I’ll be staying a while longer,” once again speaking in the same shaky voice he
had spoken with earlier.
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Josh has had a knack for writing from a young age; mostly poetry. The Demon Within is his debut novel and, according to Josh, nearly wrote itself. He is a US Army veteran and has been deployed to the Balkans and Middle East. He has been an IT professional for about a decade.
Many of the events in The Demon Within were taken from Josh's life and "put through the fiction blender" as he puts it. When pressed for more details, he said he couldn't give specifics for fear of "giving spoilers," but, he did say the book includes fictional spins on things ranging from childhood bullying to being placed in the Las Vegas foster care system.
He currently lives in Columbus OH with his family and is working on book two of his 'The Last War' series.
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